This is truly a great poem, written so greatly... however, i do not agree with your message cause in my opinion we should be more of your selves then most of the problams will be solved in our lifes, it is just how i see it, but the poems was the greatest.

I gave this poem a 4/5 because it kinda didnt flow too well in some parts where you rhymed and then didnt.but overall,it was a good poem. it kind of reminds me of myslef in a way.

The flow was a tad off for me just a tad but otherwise i thought this poem was good

The main problem I found here was the flow.
It seems forced but not forced.
I'm not sure but it didnt sound right to me.

Other than that it is a well used topic so you should try push it further to make it better than the others who do the same topic.

Theres no shame in doing a topic already done, the shame is in not doing it as good. :]]

Keep writing.
You got talent, just push it a little further.

This was a good poem, but it could have been stronger. Once again I must say that the shorter the poem, the stronger it should be. I did enjoy it though! =) 4/5 Word Hard!

-Liz-
~of life to live, I gave it all up~

I also give it a four out of five.
Don't take it personally.
I just don't think a poem with any
Unnecessary pronouns flow well.
It would also be better
If you not use the word "cause"

I like this peice, i think the message was clear, the emtion strong, The flow was just a little bit off for me.But I believe you have a lot of talent, just keep up the good work. 4/5

Nice work, a bit on the simpler side, but that doesn't make the meaning any less stronger. You have great potential and a lot of skill, so keep writing! 4/5

~jas~

How sad...i loved it alot because i can relate...i liked the flow and the wording...it's great...so sad but great...

Normally, this poem would be a 4.0, but every time the flow was messed up, it seemed to catch on. It was well written, and I can understand where you are coming from. it was well written, and I did enjoy it.

I don't really know what to say. It seems like a quiet poem..... Whatever that means.

5/5
~Stephen White.

This is a preaty good poem except Ive heard this thing so many times.. from so many differnt poets each twiqued just enough to say that its not taken from anyone else. I'm sorry but thats the best comment I can give on this one.. keep trying and when you get an idea try and make it the most different that you can.

Wow great poem!

I really enjoyed reading this poem, just because i could relate and the emotions that you spoke of seemed to really come out in the words that you chose.. your structure also, is quite amazingly well set out as it is an appealing poem to read because it is broken into stanza's at fluent and well timed spots... again a 5/5 effort

Cool poem and very true. Keep up the great work.5/5

"My life is screwed up,
But you'll never see,
You'll never know,
What it's like to be me"
^ I loved that part.

The rest was a bit cliche, but I'm sure a LONG TIME AGO, it wouldn't have been cliche. Lol.

Good Job. <3
I liked it, lots.
4/5

Loved this poem. lately i havent read so many love poems. i think this was good. i can relate to this somehow. I also like the rhyming scheme that you used. ver well-written. 5/5 keep up the good work.

*~*MiSsUnDeRsToOd TeArS*~*

I love this poem! good choice of words! well penned you're really talented good job! TC :)

This is a pretty good poem. But i think it needed more description i didn't feel it as much as i should. Good idea though.

I gave this poem 4/5. in some parts it didnt flow too well but i really enjoyed reading it. good job!

This poem didnt flow well, But i did like the meaning behind it, It was an enjoyable read but i think you could of made the emotion much stronger with deeper vocab. I understand it is an old poem and with ur latest poems u have improved so well done~mel