Mmm. i didnt know you wrote another poem. i liked this one goran! job WELL done. the rhythm and flow wasnice. and the message was perfect. 5/5.

Mmm... oh where to go with this.

Ok babe, there is no one that can judge better than you who you deserve, unless it is a violent or abusive relationship.

Each person must decide for themselves if the relationship and they one they love are worth the work and heartache they must endure. Only the individuals involved can truly answer what price they are willing to pay.

I hope that you will continue to think of your lost love with fondness and integrity. This shows that you not only respect her but also true love had flourished for a brief moment.

Keep your head held high babe and no matter what always listen to your own intuition before others.

--Sher

This has feeling in it.. i understand what your going through. i recently had a break up as you know from my poetry.. i give this 5/5 because its that good.. i dont think all poems have to flow.. its what comes from the heart that matters.. as long as you can read it then i think its good.. anyway keep writing!

What a great poem. The message was clear to the reader.
It was full of emotion.
You are a talented writer.

Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

I have never read such an open minded poem! it expresses what you think and at the same time your standing up for waht you believe.

im with you. people should not judge the book by its cover. this girl your talking about seems nice, and if you like her, and she likes you, you should be happy with it.

any ways, your poem is really nice, please dont stop writing! i just got into poetry last week, ive never been so good at it.

please keep writing! it would mean alot to a young girl that is only in grade six!

-Krisha Moen 11years old (almost twelve!)

A beautiful poem!

Oh wow. its funny but this was just what i needed to read. it feels like you just read my mind. amazing.

Very nicely written...it was an easy read that didn't require a hidden story which was good for me right now because it is quite early in the morning. I think this poem was very well written and I could easily relate nice work!

This was a great poem. So true as well. You should never judge anyone before meeting them. Very well done! =] 5/5

`-jackie.