by ASPHYXIATED Apr 21, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Day after day, I stood by your side, |
I loved it, darling. |
Hey!..the poem is perfect And great the way it is....it has it's own charm...wonderful work..kp it up!.. |
by Kristina
This is a great poem about lost friendship. i know how it feels. it hurts, you'll get over it soon. amazing poem though. it flowed really nicely. 5/5 |
by Curry
Awhh this is real sad:[ but it was wonderfully written. it definetly gets 5/5 from me. great job! |
by Ammi
Nah.. u dont need to change a thing! it was really touching aye.. your really talented! its like a poem we can relate to... .but the way the words n rhymes flow, shows real meaning n makes me feel empathetic... |