Great job....and I dont know if this will help but it seems like the stanzas should be more broken up and the ending is a little weak...Just a suggestion for an ending...

Our love has dwindled and come to pass
My love was so great but it could never last
As I struggled to keep myself afloat
There we went in separate boats
The waves carrying us further apart
Now I let go, in search for a new start.

<As I said, its compeltely a suggestion, you asked for honest answers and after reading it, this is what I thought> Soo....good luck and great job otherwise...you asked for a helping hand and that is the sign of a dedicated poet, someone not willing to sacrifice integrity of the poem for the convenience of a "finished" poem. 5/5-Unattractive1

Nah.. u dont need to change a thing! it was really touching aye.. your really talented! its like a poem we can relate to... .but the way the words n rhymes flow, shows real meaning n makes me feel empathetic...
keep it up xoxox xXxAmmixXx

Awhh this is real sad:[ but it was wonderfully written. it definetly gets 5/5 from me. great job!

This is a great poem about lost friendship. i know how it feels. it hurts, you'll get over it soon. amazing poem though. it flowed really nicely. 5/5

~Kristina

Hey!..the poem is perfect And great the way it is....it has it's own charm...wonderful work..kp it up!..
xxPoojaxx

I loved it, darling.
The flow was nice,
I really loved the ending.
Had a lovely ring to it. :]
ily! xxxx
5/5
-Heater