There was a good rythm here, the flow was good but not brilliant. some of the lines seemed too long and didnt work with the flow but a good piece overall
well done
xxx

Wow, very good write!
Keep it up

I really like this poem too..it was perfect..5\5 good job

I loved the rhyming. You are very good at it. Unlike me:) The flow was wonderful and I really liked the word choice and the format you used worked great. I gave it a 5/5.

Another good one. I liked the flow of it. 5/5

Ravyn

Oh wow I really enjoyed this :) Wonderfully penned! choice of words was good, vocab was great, out of your three poems this one's the best keep writing! and sorry for the late comment :)

5/5!

Wow, this is a good poem. You totally expressed your feeling very well. 5/5

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