That was so CREEPY! I LOVED IT! gave me the CHILLS! 5/5! ALL THE WAY!

-Liz-
~muahs, luv ya bunches~

Ohhhh I wish it would've went on it was so amazing and the flow was so great!!! You did a wonderful job!

Wow.
I effing love this.
I know it's weird
But I can hear this from Harry Potter.
Only one critique, though.
The rhyming kind of seems force.
It ruins the great flow of your poem.
:]

And you said that i wrote scary poems?
this was eral creepy, but i loved it! def 5/5
-Black night-

What a wonderful and deep poem you have here! 5/5

That was chilling. i loved it. it is diffrent from most of the poems i read. You did a good job. Please keep up the work and thanks for the comments.

All I could think of was Hansel and Gretle,It was like a scary kids story ,very good!

This is great. great rhythm and great word useage. very nice flow. keep up the great writing!

Very nice. I like how you used cauldron as a way of death because cauldron is a pot for cooking. lol....very unique...Def. 5/5!
-Amanda

I love thes dark magic type of poems. Again liked the format. 5/5