I lay in this empty bed, & I stare at the motionless ceiling,
Im thinking of you my love, and Im hating how Im feeling.
You are with her, & theres not a damn thing to do,
You left me lonely & cold, Im still deeply in love with you.
So please come back darling, Im missing you so much,
Your love is slowly fading away, but I still feel your touch.
I know I deserve better, but I want you instead,
Im feeling so lost right now, I might as well be dead.
Though I know I need you like another hole in the head,
Your face wont go away, I still remember what you said.
So when you see me, do you think of what used to be?
Do you remember my laugh, or see my hurt eyes, can you feel me?
Because I can feel you baby, even when your not around,
Darling you'll always be with me, even when Im dead in the ground.
I have to admit that the flow is cool. I like the way you have worded the poem and the reason why you are lone is lucid in the light of this piece. great keep writing. 5.5