by Alex Apr 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Driving in the car, in the back seat, |
by Jenni Marie
This is beautifully written and so very sad at the same time...though short you managed to put such a lot of emotion and depth into this piece, and it makes for a very intense read. |
by Boy
Aahaa it relates to me.. nice work i loved your poem offcourse words was also nicely used in this poem i willm ust give 5/5 |
Good work...very touching...sudden ride to reality...great work....u've done this one so well..in a real well manner..kp it up! |
I agree with Gem, you make it look easy. I have a hard time writing poems taht don't rhyme. Good work though, kiddo. I liked the message in this poem. =) |
Dieing = dying |