So...who's the lucky man who doesn't realize you're alive kaila? an awesome poem, i enjoyed it. |
by Melpomene
I liked this poem alot it was nicely written. Loved it alot. Nice good job~Mel |
by Mousie
So pretty and touching.. really a good write, i loved the wording and the flow, wonderful job, i gave it a 5/5. |
by firexdancer
This is so sweet!!! i can relate exactly to this, and you did a gorgeous job of putting this feeling into words. it flowed so smoothly, and was so beautiful.... 5/5 |
by David
Oh this is so sweet! its so magical and full of love. i really enjoyed reading this wonderful poem. |
I definitely love this poem . Like wow . I`m gonna keep going back to this poem, cuhs` I don`t know why, but it just really ... Wow . It could be because it brings me back to when I still believed in love . |
by Kristina
Wow wonderful poem! i really enjoyed reading this. i think you did a great job on it! 5/5 |
Hey, |
by skynerraw
Wow, this poem is amazing! |
by lexie
Kaila i love this poem . |
by Brook
Thanks so much for the poem comments! i love the comments =] |
You described desire perfectly. |
by N J Thornton
This seemed like an average love poem to me; same overused subject base. |
by omgitsmina
I love the overall tone of frustration and hoplessness that flows throghout the entire piece. Very nice choice of rhyme pattern, it goes appropreatly with the short lines in the stanzas; sometimes the fewer words we use, the more we invite the mind to come to its own conclusion and use its own imagination. Very well written, if I do say so myself. |
by Crystal Gaze
Kaila, Magnificent (sp?) write. |
by Vanessa
I really liked this poem. The flow was awesome, and you put so much feeling into your word choice. An amazing write 5/5 |
by Brittany C
Great poem. I completely understand where you are coming from. I'v been through the same thing but than again I dont think I have a chance to get with any one. Anyways keep up the great work. 5/5 |
by Startle Me
I enjoyed this poem :]. |
by Debbie
I think it's a cute poem. There are some parts where I can correlate with this piece, whereas I can't to the other part. Such as waiting for this person to do a move--ah, yes! I have been thoroughly annoyed about that.. |
by moonlil
Very beautiful poem! |