I can relate to your poem so much and when someone is able to relate to your poem its obviously really good keep on writing more i enjoyed reading it

Love the poem sweetheart! 5/5 : )

Really nice job---Trully does lay out the inner feeling of a person in love who cant tell their beloved what they feel about them--I really liked it--:)

This is very well-ly written. I enjoyed reading it and could feel your emotions. I think it is very good. Keep up your amazing writing; maybe one day you'll be famous...lol

This Is a Very Good Poem. Check out mine sometime.

I love this poem because i reminds me of how i feel i really enjoyed it and great writing
from: karina...

Good job on your poem . This is very sad. Feelings of frustration are strong.

Continuously thinking,
about what your thinking too.
It kills me deep inside,
I can't tell you I love you.

I know alot of others love people that they are scared to say I love you too. Might be surprised if you say it.

Take Care Cindy

Niceley written, kiddo.. It shows your emotion, and a powerful message. It's apparent that you write with your heart. I loved reading this, I really liked this stanza..

"Continuously thinking,
about what your thinking too.
It kills me deep inside,
I can't tell you I love you."

It caught my eye in a glance.. This poem keeps your attention throughout it.
Nice work,Kaila. Keep writing!!!! =)
~Ally~

"you don't know this pain,
I'm going through or when."
^ That threw off the flow a bit.
Maybe if it said 'the pain' instead of 'this pain' ? It would help.. maybe?

And,

I thing I've gone insane,
^ it should say 'think' not 'thing'.

This poem was outstanding. It made me want to cry, I can easily relate to it. I loved the stanza before the last, it was full of emotion, just as the rest of the poem.
5/5

I'm aching for the kiss,
or that special touch.
I thing I've gone insane,
from wanting you so much

The above was my favourite part as it flowed so well. I totally know what you are/were going through when you wrote this poem.
I think this is a really emotional read, and written with true sincerity and honesty.
Well done x

Oh My Gosh!!....the poem is just beautiful....
i loved it...u must be loving the guy a lot!...anyway good work!.5/5

Kaila!!!

This was a wonderful poem...heartwrenching but wonderful

I wish girls i knew could write at all >_>...you da best ;)

I cant wait to read...and comment the next 19 of your poems T_T

Very sweet and emotional... It's a nice sweet romantic poem... I liked it.

Very cute love poem.
The flow was a bit shaky but
everything else appeard to be
fine. Watch out for force rhyming.
Keep up the great work! God Bless 5/5
1/6<-Poems.
<3Tay(^__^)

Touching, and so sweet. The flow was flawless, and the word choice was brillant. I am glad you requested that I read this one.Iam adding it and you to my favorites. 5/5

This brings me back to reality
im going through the same thing right now
and it sucks!
but this is a very good poem,
absolutely love, i give it a 5/5!!!
keep makng them this good!!!!

Wonderful job!
The word usage was great.
The emotions were clear & understandable.
& Some of your lines were very unique & original, such as:
"Desperately craving,
to see your face again,"

^ Simply perfect. Keep it up! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Wow, excellent write, I loved it. The flow as well as the rhyme was great. Keep up the awesome work.

This line, "I yearn to hear you're voice." should be, "I yearn to hear your voice." because "you're" means, "you are" and that's not what you want, you want, "your"

Also this line, "I thing I've gone insane," should be, "I think I've gone insane," I don't think you meant "thing" it should be "think" that's all...just a minor mistake.

Peace, Joe

This poem is very cute...I feel the same way about someone...I love him but am unable to tell him out of fear of rejection! It sucks, but such is life. Great poem, I enjoyed it. Maybe you should give a copy of this poem to the one you are seeking..you might be suprised at the outcome! :)

Aww.. this is the sweetest poem ever.. i love the simplicity of the it.. like you said that you tried to use every emotion that you can thinnk of .. you did.. you describe your longing for this guy really well and really let the reader feel your pain.. i especially LOVE these lines
"I'm bare without you near."
and
"I thing I've gone insane,
from wanting you so much."
^^ that is the perfect ending.. :D

"
"Desperately craving,
to see your face again,
you don't know this pain,
I'm going through or when."
^ the rhyme "again and when" seems a bit forced.. even though it makes sense.. it seems like you just used the word "when" simply because it words.. rather than because its what you really want to say