by Tara Kay
Well, you know i wasnt sure about this, the thing with something like this is it can be good, but then it could be quite crap, but dont fear, because i loved it!! |
by Superman
I am quite astonished. Excellent write!!!! |
Another good one, you've impressed me. The last line tied it all up, it was perfect. |
by Blissful
Loved it! The emotions were very easy for me to relate too busy I loved someone and wanted them soo much it was killing me inside that I didnt know how they felt. Well done, it truly made me emotional. *5/5* and you are being favorited! |
I totally loved this poem you have a lot of talent on writitng poems. It was a pleasure reading your poems. Great work. 5/5 |
by Christina
Wow i can relate to this poem 100% lol. it was very well written!!! it also had a niice flow to it that made it better! |
by TracyM
Sweet poem, was a pleasure to read, good word choice, and it flowed beautifull. Really well written. |
by brittany
I LOVE THIS POEM U ARE REALLY |
by Stephen
Kaila this is a great poem, filled with emotion! I am in the same situation you write about in this poem at the moment, it is really tough waiting on someone you know you can be extremely happy with. |