What a beautiful poem...very depressing and sinister...but briliantly written....defently 5/5
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Thia poem is really good...I like it a lot. Great job. :)

Wow!!! fantastic poem.....nice detailing........absoltuely loved it!!! very very well written!!!

That's a very nice poem, i feel the same!! i really like it, keep it up! *=D

Very sad....
did it really happen or is it just a poem?
the losin your friend part? I know how losing a friend is, but not losing a friend that i love though. it must be really hard.

Well i kind of did... hard to explain...

I love the rhyme scheme and vibe of the built up emotion. What I love most is the how the last two lines coincide with the first two but are different; changing a few words.

Wow, thats beautiful. Strong words, I loved it. =] Thanks fo' commenting muh latest.

**and I think you're a great poet, yo.**

As i was reading this I could feel your feelings pouring out into big black empty space that was filling up with everything that you cant say but can only write down. Keep up the amazing work love.