I really liked it don't bash your poem it was just fine and I know the feeling of just wanting to write so I think you did a good job.

How dare you say not too good, i know it is not good cause it is great, best and perfect......... truly this is a very romantic, deep poem.
OMG you are a great student of poetry as you improve poem after poem.you are a poet who i really love to read, i wait alot so i can read another poem by you. and also you are a poet who really care about others here, so probebly soon i will write a poem dedicated to you... as you really deserve to be noticed by all of P&Q members.
keep it up dear.

Sometimes something you just wrote down don't seem so good when you reread it, but like people say it is exceeltn to the people who read it for the first time. This is a perfect example of that. Well done. 5/5

I think this is really good. I liked the flow of it good job 5/5

Love it x

Not quite as good? man, that was awesome

5.5
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Though it was short, I thought it was a great poem! It was full of love, happiness, and just so much emotion. I could just picture all of this happening inside my mind. Great job! Keep up the good work. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

I love the beggining..how it says the prince met the pincess in a world so dark, thats so cute!!

great job(: