Break My Heart

by XxMoonLightxX   Apr 21, 2007


I am all alone,
On my own,
I sit in the dark,
And think about the tears that left a bloody mark,
I live for the past,
Wishing things would not have gone so fast,
He is the one I wish for on a star,
The only one who has enough of me to break my heart!

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  • 17 years ago

    by ThatPerson

    I really liked this poem,is short,yet-it makes sence-keep it up! =) ~Ria

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Once again, appeared forced. The flow needs work. Just keep trying on your poems. YOu will get better at them. The more you write, the better you get. Keep it up!
    Thank you for the comments and rates!
    God Bless 4/5
    <3Tay^__^

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    I can relate to this. Great job. It is a little short though. It looks like the emtion would be stronger for a short poem, but all in all still a good read. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    I can relate to this poem.. It was short and yet simple, and easilly read, the message was great, and the flow as well as the rhyme were dead on, keep up the good work, kiddo. =)
    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    Wow, I really liked this poem...I think that you did a really good job with showing the emotion that you were feeling and the regret of moving so fast. It is unfortunately everyone should be able to relate, I mean, its unfortunate that everyone has regreted a relationship that was doomed because of moving too fast. Fortunate because you tapped into those feelings with your poem. Great job.

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