Wow, I really liked this poem...I think that you did a really good job with showing the emotion that you were feeling and the regret of moving so fast. It is unfortunately everyone should be able to relate, I mean, its unfortunate that everyone has regreted a relationship that was doomed because of moving too fast. Fortunate because you tapped into those feelings with your poem. Great job.

I can relate to this poem.. It was short and yet simple, and easilly read, the message was great, and the flow as well as the rhyme were dead on, keep up the good work, kiddo. =)
-Ally

I can relate to this. Great job. It is a little short though. It looks like the emtion would be stronger for a short poem, but all in all still a good read. 4/5

Once again, appeared forced. The flow needs work. Just keep trying on your poems. YOu will get better at them. The more you write, the better you get. Keep it up!
Thank you for the comments and rates!
God Bless 4/5
<3Tay^__^

I really liked this poem,is short,yet-it makes sence-keep it up! =) ~Ria