by lexie Apr 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
In my dungeon is where I stay. |
by Kaila
Lexiekins!! This is so amazing and I feel your pain really I do. Please don't self harm anymore it's so bad. The flow which is the stanza and lines and stuff could be fixed but other then that this poem was so beautiful |
by Marc Ortiz
I like the way you rhyme the first and last line in the 1st stanza! good job! |