Gem
What a beautiful poem. You did a excellent job on your poetry form. Imagery and word choices were great.
Take Care Love Cindy

Aww... i loved it!! you're and awesome poet, no wonder you won my contest!!!

5/5
Allanah

Gem,
That was outstanding. I'm speechless. You should be proud of this, it is unbelievable and it looks hard to do. I could never do justice to this one.
Excellente!

Comment #2~
(*whistles*) Wow! Very ... well ... I'm speechless. You just did so well capturing the mood here. I mean your poems are all so different! And just (*sigh*)...can I say wow again without sounding too repetitive?! Lol! You did amazing, Gem...keep it up girl! 100/5
~Midnight Sun

This type of poetry seems difficult to handle, whereas you did a magnificent job writing this piece. I'm enchanted by you, once again, ma'dear! I was rather mesmerized by the third stanza as well as the concluding tercet--simply beautifully written. It's been awhile since a fine love poetry has brought me back to nostalgia. =]
Keep on writing what you feel and like, and I surely will keep on reading!
Love,
Debbie

Its so beautiful almost magical.A real delight and master piece to read.And the way to followed the strict format amazes me further.Excellent job dear.

Take care
chavii.

Wow ive learned something new today :) thank Gem, oh but i could never write something like this, god you're good :))

Wow you are so good at writing poems :)
loved your word choice here Gem, and hey ive learnt a new kind of poem as i always do when reading yours lol
~*~Jen~*~

Wow i really like this poem can you comment one of mine thank love always linda
5/5

That was cute... ^_^

I liked the story it told pretty awesomelike :D

Mad props too cuz it would be really hard to make a poem with such strict...rules? lol u know what i mean =P

Wonderful..5/5

Wow, thats an excellent written poem. I loved the structure and all the beautiful words you used. Really great!

Excellent job on this most difficult form....beautiful!

It was good..not a lot of imagery but i love this different style..keep it up.

melissa

That's really beautiful Gem. I could never write something so complicated. Are you a pro or something? You're on my favorites. 5.5!

Wow, that was amazing! And so complex, yet so simple. Does that make sense? ^.^
It was just... wow. That was soo pretty! I love your work!

OXOX, Poeta

Wow such a complex and heart poured poem wow no mroe to say lol, you are fantastic :D

xxx alex xxx

I think this is the best poem I've read yet,even though I'm new here.
You are an excellent writter.
Keep up the good work. :D

It' a very beautiful poem. I like the very symbolic lines that makes you feel the passion right into your bones. I'm have studied medicine and therefore I'm glad too observe different kind of structures in a poem. The matematical structure is fascinating and I like it very much!

OMG.. This is really superb! WOW.. You really did a great job on this one! the choice of words was superb! I'm really speechless in this poem :) well done! 5/5!! lol you should be a pro poet! or maybe you are :P anyway I really enjoyed reading this one :)

A really beautifully written poem. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5