Comments : Rainy Day

  • 17 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    WOW O.O This was fantastic too =) 5/5
    You really do have a lot of talent =) Hope you keep writing
    ***Rhea***

  • 17 years ago

    by David Munoz

    Another well written poem. The message is really good in this one and is my favorite of the two. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nikki

    Liked it!=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Well first get rid of the symbols
    Sometimes this sight puts em in there
    I dont know why
    But anyways nice use of putting the tears instead of rain
    I forgot what that's called haha
    so yeah nice job with that!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem great flow ,and wording great, smooth ,love it and the end
    It's resplendent and it makes me shiver
    Everything anew and wet in disarray
    And when the colors in the sky indicate its over
    I'll long once more for a rainy day
    great job, ~5/5~ your friend Tracy

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Its a perfect piece with strong n wonderful descriptions. U've chosen the v best words. great 5/5
    with love
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Plse do read my 'Thank u' tc once again..great job

  • 17 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    I like rainy days....i like to dance with someone when it begins to rain...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemonbread

    Beautiful poem 5/5 keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Woah! great poem! i loved it! 5/5