Wow... i am speechless... this poem is just too much for words... i mean its absolutley perfect... the flow the word choice the depth the meaning ... i just wanted the poem to go on forever... its amazing how you find such perfect rhymes and yet they all fit together so excellent ... i wish i could say more i want to say so much more... but i really cant explain how amazing this poem... its just... wow... REALLY REALLY REALLY spectacular write... ! |
by Unrequited
This poem... is remarkable. As soon as I started reading it, I knew I had to finish it... because the deepness of thoughts and heartache resonate off the page. I love this piece... and yes, God is always there for us. :) |