Under the stars

by bleeding limegrenn   Apr 22, 2007


Tonight was special
every moment
cold
holding you tightly
keeps me worm
the blanket worm and soft like your skin
staring
the stars twinkle in the moon lit sky
taking in every moment
how romantic

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Worm
    ^You spelled it as the little nasty squishy thing. You need to change it to "warm".
    Ahh, yes please change that worm thing. It throws the poem off completely. Well aside from that flaw, like I said, lacks grammar structure and spelling. Keep working at it.
    You have potential. Don't take my comments harsh, they're just advice, future refernce, help, ect. God Bless 5/5
    <3Tay^__^

  • 17 years ago

    by Monique

    Nicw poem i love it...

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