Nicw poem i love it...

Worm
^You spelled it as the little nasty squishy thing. You need to change it to "warm".
Ahh, yes please change that worm thing. It throws the poem off completely. Well aside from that flaw, like I said, lacks grammar structure and spelling. Keep working at it.
You have potential. Don't take my comments harsh, they're just advice, future refernce, help, ect. God Bless 5/5
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