The Break Up (Acrostic)

by Italian Stallion   Apr 22, 2007


Touching each other ever so softly
Holding each other tight
Entangled in this mess with you

Breaking up with you is the only choice I have
Regret? I think not, this must be the time
Escaping this pain I have within my soul
Another night with you by my side
Keeps me from moving on to better things

Until this moment in time
People thought you where great, well not me

© Copyright 2007 By: Italian Stallion

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title. Pretty straight forward, no rhyme scheme or syllable count.
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  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I loved the first stanza it was very very easy for me to relate to it and I loved that the end was really good almost an expected but you were still shocked to read it thing i really enjoyed it

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Very good poem joe, unfolds beautiful, i give it a 5/5!!!! congrats on 200th poem!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    GOOD ONE!!!
    as always
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh god,
    i dont know how to explain my thoughts about this, i think i must take the advise of this poem and break up with someone,looooooool
    i think i told you this before, there s no other person that can write an acrostic like you do, if they ask me who is the best acrostic writer in this whole word, with no doubt i will say Joe.
    again another great one with best word choice and deepest feelings. keep it up dude.