Comments : The Break Up (Acrostic)

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Oh god,
    i dont know how to explain my thoughts about this, i think i must take the advise of this poem and break up with someone,looooooool
    i think i told you this before, there s no other person that can write an acrostic like you do, if they ask me who is the best acrostic writer in this whole word, with no doubt i will say Joe.
    again another great one with best word choice and deepest feelings. keep it up dude.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    GOOD ONE!!!
    as always
    5/5

    God bless u

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Very good poem joe, unfolds beautiful, i give it a 5/5!!!! congrats on 200th poem!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I loved the first stanza it was very very easy for me to relate to it and I loved that the end was really good almost an expected but you were still shocked to read it thing i really enjoyed it