Oh my goodness that was really good

I know how you feel

Still its one of my favorite

Great work....Beautiful....very well penned!
Kp up the good wrk!
xxPoojaxx

Very good
If this is true
Im sorry
I really enjoyed this poem
good job!

Cha. I like it.
I don't prefer non-rhyming poetry, but this is exceptionally good.

Anyways. The ending made the poem...though, I hope this isn't from experience. =./ That'd be bad.
Otherwise, nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Nicely Done!
5/5

This poem had so much in it, so much action that I was kept interested through the whole thing! Great job! I like how you separated the stanza's. It gave it a bit more... Umph! The main character in this poem I can see, and hear, and feel all the emotions. It's tough I can tell. How did the man of 20 die?

Wow this poem was not quite what I expected I really liked it. The ending took me by suprise. The only thing that I didnt like about it was it kind of went through kind of fast, I think that if you were to slow down a little bit and put more focus on the sins it would be better. I just think that there were to many sins in this one poem but it was still preaty good.