Hey again this was an excellent poem. whoa! so sad yet there is something else. i cant quite figure out what it is. there is like a hint of love in this.

5/5 David

Another deep emoitonally poem cindy well expressed and rhymed...well done xox lithium

I love it. It is simply great!

This is a sad but great poem cindy, love the flow, give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Can't keep going on like this
Things are taking a toll on me
Days are getting long and hard
It's you I'm needing to see
^^^
Cindy this stanza honestly brings tears to my eyes. Maybe because I've had the wonderful pleasure of getting to know you better over the last few weeks.... it just makes my heart ache knowing you are feeling so sad.
Such a touching write!

My heart is always with you my dear friend
Much love and many (((hugs))) sent your way

A very sad poem, i enjoyed it, i always believed that sad poems were the best and you reminded me that.

Best Wishes
Wallace

So much lost in my world
Times like this are the worst
Pain and fear crashing in
Thinking sometimes a curse
very good job, it fits my life to a "T"

love it, thanks and keep up that great work,,,,,,,,Tracy 5/5

"So much lost in my world
Times like this are the worst
Pain and fear crashing in
Thinking sometimes a curse"

I know--for sure--that in each word, there is an underlying meaning which is deeper and profound. I can precisely correlate with this piece, especially with the above stanza; it's like striking another arrow through my weary heart... Ah! The memories of the past!
This is heartwrenchingly sad... 'twas such a touching write indeed.
Take care always, Ms. Cindy.
Love,
Debbie

I think this is one of the best poems ive ever read so much expresion in it. it relates so much with me because im having a very bumpy relation ship at the moment ive lost good friends because of my boyfriend and i know that very soon he will call your name out i hope i can call you cindy
such a heart grasping poem it shows a lot of felling good work and i promis you he will call your name
kyna

So much lost in my world
Times like this are the worst
Pain and fear crashing in
Thinking sometimes a curse

i know what you are going through but i cant do a thing abt it.....if only prayers could be enough.

all the best and take care

Cindy, my heart goes out for you everytime i read your love poems.There is so much pain and honesty which we readers can feel with you.Very heartfelt poem and well written.

Take care
chavii.

"Rummaging through my thoughts
Only echo's off the walls"

That couplet struck me as i feel like i've been doing this a lot lately.
Searching for answers that only one person can reply to. And that person just isn't around..
Heart wrenching piece sweets
5/5
*Gem*

(P.S. My topics come from the empty depths of my mind and whatever's around me, lol)

Wow!

You're really talented. Your poetry has real meaning.

I wish at school we learnt to write poetry like this. :(

All we learn to write about is; sunshine, rainy days, dogs etc.

Night can be so hard....

Another lonely night arrives
Walking alone in my mind
Dark, deserted, cold, and still
Not another soul to find

Hope someday you have a beautiful dawn....Love, Debbie

Very good poem Cindy, I hope you feel better. I know there are days where we are down and theres nothing we can do but things will getter better we just have to focus on the good around us, and that may help. Take care!

It's so sad knowing THOUSANDS out there feel this way and do hear things and feel alone. I'm not sure what I can do but theres got to be something!
I loved this poem it was a little bit spooky and deep, but it fit many people description!!
Great Job Cindy!
Chelsey

WOW! this was a great poem it showed your true feelings and how vunerable people can be, no one likes to feel alone I know I hate even the thought of feeling lonely and having no one around to support you it's hard to loose someone you care about you pretent that your okay but the truth every minute of everyday you can't stop thinking about them.
Wish you all the best your a great poet

Full of deep and sad emotions. You portrayed your sorrow well in this piece. I hope one day you are reunited with your angel in paradise.

I like this one..one at it's best.
Really through the heart..

This is truly breathtaking. i love the poems 5/5
plz see my poem soldiers plea and tell me if you like it.

bye..