This poem is an exact way of describing how i feel right now and how i felt for the past 6 months...

there was ovbiously alot of emotion put into this poem and thats what makes it so good
some people think it just about writing rhymes about jumping rope and flowers but poetry is much more than that
it is about passion, emotion , feeling etc.
And you put that into this poem

5/5 from me...very very very nice job!
check out some of my poesm i have many like this

Thanks!
~love my fellow poet~
~shannon~
~Here i am trying to make sense of it all, we were best friends now we dont' even talk , you broke my heart, ripped my world apart~

Wow this is a great poem 5 out of 5 when i read this poem i wanted to have all my friends read it too it is just very well written and keep up the good work!!!

I'm a harsh critic, sorry and all. It has bad timing, when I read aloud, it keeps my breath off, which doesn't sound good with the poem. And it has little real life substance.

Beautiful...

Pretty and sad...

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I liked this. It seemed really deep with a layer of sadness and longing in it. I think you did a really good job with it.

Excellent Poem, nicely written in every way. 5/5

I love this poem. You're really talented. Your poetry has real meaning. Well penned, all the best and take care

-Xoxo-

Wow. Beautiful flow, wonderful imagery, flawless perfection. Oh, If only I could still write something like this... I miss my perfect poems.

Your poems are awesome, and this is just another awesome poem.

Good job, keep the ink flowing...
5/5
~Stephen White

So sad that others must suffer this pain as well....