This poem is so original... and I can tell it comes from the heart. Jeez this is wonderful! YOU are wonderful, and your words leave me breathless.

This was lovely thanks for sharing it

Ok i have no idea who the
Vonnie Mchugh is but she's said exact comment to 2 other poems i've read. but that was beautiful i loved it...it is definatly somethin that makes me want to have a look through the rest of your work

Aww.. this poem is so genuine and sweet... I especially like the last stanza where u describe all the seasons :)

<3 cassya

**Let me be the summer, spring, fall and winter of your life
Let me be the February rain and July sunshine of your life
Let me be the north, south, east and west of your life
and I'll always remember you as the very best of my life.

...so...what are you doing for rest of your life?
(please won't you spend your life...with me...) **

WOW WOW WOW the whole month thing and how you repeated life really pulled me in. than it suprised me when you said: **
(please won't you spend your life...with me...)**

that just made it all the more real, and was a great great ending. keep it up you are a fabulous writer. love your work. you're in my favs.

melissa