Oh wow! Such a brilliant poem!! This was amazing and refreshing and good! Best poem I've read in awhile great job!

Hand the boy a weapon,
Hold it to his heart,
Wait 'til he hears the words,
That rip the world apart,

^^ my favorite stanza wonderful job!

One last moment in the world,
As the media has control,
Exploiting every move we make,
And the emotions they have stole,

This stanza was my favourite because it really fits into the reality of the world in the present. The media are such a big influence on so many people and they have their ways to control the way that people can think and feel. Its sad that the world has come to this. Great write though!

Take care

Excellent piece, sad but enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work!

Hmm, this poem was really interesting, makes you think about all the good and bad in this world. War, weapons, those are some really terrible things. This poem is more on an enlightened poem, and it was good, I liked it. Nice job.

My favorite BY fAR from the other two ive read.. lol ... the ending was really strong and written perfectly.. and just like in all your poems.. you have a way with excellent word choice.. keep up the good work :D