by ASPHYXIATED Apr 22, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Wife -- |
I liked it, I think it was a true concept. |
by limp
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by Andrew
Absolutly superb concept, one I haven't seen before in a poem. It doesn't flow as well as some of your others, but that probably helps the poem since real life arguments rarely flow perfect. But for the concept alone superb, and I had to keep reading to find out what'll happen next, and what will be said. |
Lol....So beautiful....well presented...i loved the way u've splitted it!Great work and soo true too...kp it up! |
This is another lovely poem. I like how it goes back and forth between the two. But the thing is, its never resolved. Like the husband never ADMITS to cheating, so we just go with what the wife believes? |