Everyone else

by broken wings   Apr 22, 2007


Well i can't help
but say to what everyone else
is thinking
let me
state the obvious again

criticism
can be so hard
or constructive
but that breaks down the life to

even though the pain
is forevermore
just there
all the broken people in denial
will have their chance to shine

________________________________________
to all of the broken hearted people, to all the suicidal people, to all the kids suffering, i can relate to you. hold on long enough to shine.i love you forever.
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  • 17 years ago

    by Lori Lee

    That was very sweet and the message was good. I like the fact that you wrote that about the people who suffer and you let them know they're not alone. this could save someone. I loved it. 5/5

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