That was so sad! :( i loved the idea and the thought behind it my only suggestion would have to be that each stanza seemed to have a different structure then the last.

but you don't have to take that on board!! just a thought.

well done babe!! if it wasn't so late i'd have a peep at another one :)

thanks so much 4 the comment *hugs*

Wow omg i really like that where do u get the inspiraton for these amazing poems