Without you

by Shadow   Apr 22, 2007


Without you
I'm dreaming, about us forever dreaming
Fogetting about reality
My soul is loudly screaming

Without you
I'm drowning, In my thoughts I'm deeply drowning
Can't seem to let you go
My mind has made me frowning

Without you
I'm feeling, this burning love I'm feeling
My heart is getting weak
But this blazing fire is healing

With you
I'm breathing, my soul is truly breathing
Your love is all I need
To mend this heart that's seething

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  • 16 years ago

    by never let go of the falling angels

    Good job very intresting and hoping the best for you. good luck in trying to get back to them love your writening 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Im So OVER IT

    This poem is very interesting. i like how you put it together. you have good talent

  • 17 years ago

    by Linds

    That is so cool, dude you have a great girt. I love writing and art as well. I do a lot of poems to express how I feel too.

    --Lindsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem!
    I really like the sructure.
    Easy words, nice flow and great rhyming.
    A pleasure to read.
    Well done

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Love the way you put your words...
    and the way you repeated without you
    the flow was really nice...

    keep it up

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