Lost you.

by Miu   Apr 22, 2007


Warm sea water touches tips of my toes,
I sit down there, all alone.
As the sun falls into the water, I'm losing my sight.
And the bright life, i had, is turning black and white.
The soft wind messes my hair,
I close my eyes, whispering your name,
Feel like you are here,
Kissing me softly, taking my pain away,
But a little tear running down my face.
and in my mouth, there is no sweet taste.
You were never strong enough to fight.
Earth cries the most painful tears tonight.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bugg

    This is beautiful. I could really see and feel like I was there with you. I loved the flow. Great job!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina

    Very good....i liike the rythme of the poem!.....

    and the rhyming mad sence like u used to words that made sence in ur poem not just 2 random words just so ur poem rhymed great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    This is so sad, and it is so easy to relate to...your word choice is perfect and its just so beautifully sad... *hugs*
    5/5
    - ali xxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this is sad. I felt like this once. Definately on my favs. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by cory

    Awwww i love this poem so full of emotion.great job!!= )5/5

    Cory

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