by Miu Apr 22, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Warm sea water touches tips of my toes, |
by Bugg
This is beautiful. I could really see and feel like I was there with you. I loved the flow. Great job!!! |
by Christina
Very good....i liike the rythme of the poem!..... |
by ali
This is so sad, and it is so easy to relate to...your word choice is perfect and its just so beautifully sad... *hugs* |
Wow, this is sad. I felt like this once. Definately on my favs. 5/5 |
by cory
Awwww i love this poem so full of emotion.great job!!= )5/5 |