Luanne
This is a very diffrent poem. I love it :) Brings to light somethings we don't often think about.

Oh Lord I hope he is ok in this weather
ten squirts of windex, blasted smudges
ten sheets of paper towel and ten wipes
please make it stop raining, so I know he's safe

I really liked this stanza. Excellent job!
Take Care Love Cindy

Luanne I love hearing about people with OCD...I wish there was a job dealing with people who have this disorder..is there? Because its so interesting to me ...I hope that doesn't make it wrong on my part, but I just find it interesting...why haven't I ever wrote about it?!!..

I loved what you did with the idea for the challenge.....that last line by the way....Brilliant!! It sounds like a song! "Must make sure hes ok, on the day that it rains"...o0o0o it kinda inspires me to write something!
Anyways jumping off subject like we do haha...I loved this poem Luanne, your description were done to a T....I loved it!

I know someone with this diagnosis and the freaky thing is, she has a thing with the number ten as well!
Your poem explained it so well Lu, it was so hard hittingly spot on!
Yet it portayed the other side as well, the side of caring that comes with it.
Excellently done, i have yet to do this challenge. There's nothing out my window to write about, lol
5/5
*Gem*

Luanne, this is fantastic, I really got sucked into the poem and the main character.

I thought you described it really well and your use of words was great, it had a dead good flow as well

All in all, wonderful, I really enjoyed reading this, well done indeed, well done!!

LOVE
Katie!
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