by Zach-E Apr 22, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
We are but empty vessels, |
I love the idea and imagery in the poem. It's good work. |
by Zach-E
I also tried to show a lack of conformity within my writing during the later part of my piece from the ordinary rhyme scheme that I display in my pieces. I don't know if you caught that. |
by Zach-E
Well I'm not gonna say it's inspired by eminem but I could see how you could to that conclusion. I just read pieces by Vonnegut and |
by geeeeee
Fixed and cemented into lives of conformity |
by Cindy
What a intense and thought provoking piece. |