What a intense and thought provoking piece.
Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Fixed and cemented into lives of conformity

Everything you said in this poem was filled with truth, yet that one line really stood out to me. Its like conformity has become a natural part of our everday lives, consuming us, people constantly change to be this "other identity" that there not but in the end you must think that you're only kidding yourself. I really loved this poem.

All the best aye.

Well I'm not gonna say it's inspired by eminem but I could see how you could to that conclusion. I just read pieces by Vonnegut and
"Howl" by Ginsberg so I was kind of experimenting with a different type of writing and thinking a lot about conformity lately.

I also tried to show a lack of conformity within my writing during the later part of my piece from the ordinary rhyme scheme that I display in my pieces. I don't know if you caught that.

I love the idea and imagery in the poem. It's good work.