Comments : Looking through the window

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Really good job on this one Chels!.. I've always walked through the streets downtown and noticed the homeless people, and I always wondered what their stories were. You never really know. I really love your poems hun, they really make me think, and wonder about things going on in this world! You have so much talent!.. Keep writing!..

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Chelsey
    Excellent job on your poem. The way you took this and had your person looking in a window instead of out....was surely a diffrent way to look at things.

    The window I look through
    Is full of warmth, kisses, and hugs
    The window I look through
    Is filled with family love

    Great !
    Take care Cindy