Comments : Red Hallways; Filthy Minds

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Chels! Omg, that is so scary. Especially because it is true for a lot of people. Schools in Canada are not quite that bad, but I have tons of friends in the US that fear for their lives everyday, and it's terrible, they can't learn that way!.. This was a really inspiring poem, it gives awareness to those that don't know what happens at school. Parents think their kids go their to learn, but there are so many things that happen behind those closed doors. Terrible how corrupted the school system is. Not only students too, like you pointed out. Beautiful poem Chels, you really are a great poet. Keep on writing from your heart. *Hugs* Love ya still :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Chelsey
    With everything going on in todays world it does make you scared to send your children to school. The children I am sure are just as scared to go. Very intense write Chelsey. Great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Chels congrats on your spotlight today .... much deserved hun.
    You put so much emotion into your writing. I honestly felt like I was right there seeing all these things happen..
    Touching A.I.D ...So very touching

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!...this one really scared me.....excellent..u added so much of emotions into this one...very touching n powerful......very deep..n Excellent!
    Superb write!
    xxPoojaxx