by Jessie Apr 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
When Diamonds Never Sparkle, And Flowers Cease To Grow, When Thunder Doesn't Echo, And Rivers Don't Flow. When Hearts No Longer Wonder, And Hands Are Never Held, When Smiles Are Only Memories, And Hope Is Never Felt. When Trees No Longer Blossom, And Stars Refuse To Rise, When Autumn Has No Falling Leaves, And Winter Never Dies. When Time Has No Tomorrows, And Rainbows Have No Hue, When God, Alone, Commands Me, Then Ill Stop Loving You. |
Wow i really liked how this all flowed. great, great job keep it up! |
by Jezzika
I Love it!!!... 5/5 ... I love how it just flows... the ended did come a little as a surprise to me but in the end as a total it was a good poem! |