Debbie
This Acrostic...with the word choices have given it the sad feelings. What is thid one the third you have done with the name Gibson...yet each one is penned so diffrently. Excellent work!
Take Care Cindy

"Daunting chords marred the interior of my soul;
Sightless passion diminished by Reason's control."

That was an excellent couplet
Your vocab is of such a wide range, it's amazing.
I learn a lot from you with every poem i read!
5/5
*Gem*

Cool! These poems always intrest me because they deserve more time and effort then a normal poem does because it needs to spell ut a word. I think you did a wonderful job

Another great poem. I wish that I could write like that. This poem has great flow to it. Another 5/5:)

Wonderdul poem.
In so little words you siad so much.
The emotion was deep.
I loved it.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Wow. i really wish i could write like that. that was awsome.. really inspiring.. Very emotional.. Very deep also!! Keep writing. your very talented!!! 5/5

You give such life and style to such a simple form. I loved it

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

I truly think this is one of the better acrostic poems I have read,great job.

^ Gidson is a human being.

Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz...

I liked your descriptions very much. Its a nice poem. Thanx for your kind wish. God bless you and keep you healthy.

I liked your descriptions very much. Its a nice poem. Thanx for your kind wish. God bless you and keep you healthy.

Amazing poem.. you are an amazing writer.. excellent work.. keep it up and thanks for the comment =]

Wow.. this is an amazing poem.. i didnt even notice that it was acrostic until i read the ending when you told us.. acrostics are hard and you seemed to have mastered it here in this poem.. wonderful work :D

You have such a great vocab in all of your poems, this one is really fantastic with excellent flow. I loved the 3rd and 4th line, fantasticly written 5/5

Seriously, how long have you been properly writing for? because from your work, it seems like years!

Amazing work. Always a pleasure to read.

''Sightless passion diminished by Reason's control.''

My favourite line..very strong and intense..as was the whole poem.
I found this very sad, and yet so beautifully written.
Flow, again, is spot on, emotions scream through the words and are clear for all to see, imagery used was beautiful and word choice a pleasure to read.

I loved the topic, the theme and the good powerful choices of words.. it gave me something to think about and that is what I loved about this poem.. ur a good writer and I hope you never forget that.. good job and keep up with the good work .. 5/5

Awesome job, I love your poetry! It's so refreshingly different. Keep it up!

Fantastic.i couldnt take my eyes off it as i read it! i didnt want to miss a single syllable