This is very very wonderful, the play of words here is amazing. I absouletly love how the words are used and how they paint a lovely, yet sad picture of rejection and pain. 5/5 for sure

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

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That was SOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!! Definetly a 5/5!!!! It had a nice flow and rythym to it!! The acrostic was very clever. Keep it up!

Excellent acrostic..very beautiful...
I reaaly loved the choice of words for this one..and it had a greart flow..short yet wonderful write!
5/5
xxPoojaxx

A wonderfully penned acoustic poem. i loved it. the way you word your writing is just beautiful. i gave you a 5/5 for this because it was excellent. you have a great poetic mind.

It is meant to say acrostic, sorry bout the double comment, just had to fix my mistake

Wow, this was amazing. i loved it! it was short but it had a very strong meaning. The words you used were very well put and i enjoyed reading this. great job!! :]

Wow you vocab make the poem even better nice work kepp it up 5/5

Verycute Mary, its beautifully worded. I just wanna know know more about Gidson ;-). Your selection of words are just the best.

Tc dear

With love
Fsams

The wording were excellent and unique and flow was great..To sya about topic is so dark and sad
You did a wonderful poetry form in my opinion
Keep it up,
Laura

Hey debs,
nice poem, you always use great words in your poems just like this poem, the flow is great and It doesn't seemed forced ( most acrostics are really forced) so all I have to say is great work! 5/5 from me hun,
kisses stephanie

This is such a beautiful poem! I'm not sure what "Stygian" means, but the rest makes perfect sense! My favorite line was
"Daunting chords marred the interior of my soul;" how poetic - its not exactly imagery, but its really close! amazing poem! 5/5!

Gidson is a name of a friend of mine.

This was beautiful. Like many have said before, the vocabulary you use is lovely. I love the flow in this. You're an amazing poet.

5/5.

Hmm...this poem is so beautifully written =] your use of volcab is once more very good at forming imagery, and the flow is also constant. i enjoyed the rhymes, which didnt seem even the slightest forced, which usually happens in other acrostics that are rhymed! the overall concept was quite emotional yet blunt, like you no longer felt pain... i dunno, thats how i felt =]
nuf luv xx

Well done
this flowed very well, and it worked well too.
The vocabulary was awesome and i loved the poem.
5/5
xxxx

Oh. My.
"Daunting chords marred the interior of my soul;
Sightless passion diminished by Reason's control."
Beautiful imagery. This piece possessed a brilliant and unblemished flow; the rhyming couplets were just superbly woven in.
Can't wait for the next three poems! Wooohooo! :D
Well done, Debbie!

AWESOME!!!

this has to be the best acrostic ive read so far

Beautiful written.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Great poem!

Great work. Nice use of vocabulary.