WOW :| that was short but it was really good. Excellent vocab, superb choice of words. I think it was a perfect poem!

5/5! for this fantastic work!

Thanks for the comment on 'My Last Farewell' I really appreciate it :)

Wow.. I always used to write those funny poems with my name.. like: B is for beautiful.. etc. =P But this is really lovely =) I should try this.. but I don't think it'll work out like yours! Keep up the good work hun.
xxx

Sooo good i like how i could see it unraveling right in front of me great write

You use veyr intricate words which i find MADE this poem.
Congrats.
5.5
best acrostic ever

Well i thought it very very good, i mean your vocabulary was really strong and ur rhyming was great, it never semmed forced and everything flowed perfectly...............

"Daunting chords marred the interior of my soul;
Sightless passion diminished by Reason's control."

it is such a great couplet

love the choice of words, 5/5

Well i thought it very very good, i mean your vocabulary was really strong and ur rhyming was great, it never semmed forced and everything flowed perfectly...............

"Daunting chords marred the interior of my soul;
Sightless passion diminished by Reason's control."

it is such a great couplet

love the choice of words, 5/5

Wow, this is short but very effective and powerful. The wording is excellent, and my favorite line is:
-Daunting chords marred the interior of my soul;-
^Greatly written.
5/5

I'll add this to my favorites Marian and by the way, what a nice name you have! :) it is very much like mine ;)

Marjan

Wow this is really great. Seriously, it's beautifully written. Your choice of words in this piece make it so powerful. 5/5

marcella

What a great piece of work. realy aggressive. and the real meaning of acrostic writing. i lovedit. it was aswesome.

you deserve 5/5

Sightless passion diminished by Reason's control.
[[I love, love, love this line by it's description of "Reason". Beautiful.]]

And I adore the last line.
God, you make me breathless. I hate you. >.<

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Wow very good i liked the use of wrds nicly written

Great poem...i really like the vocab usage in this one...excellent job! i give you a 5/5.