by Lauren Waszkiewicz Apr 22, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Her faith in God almighty shall be drained. |
by Robert
I always hated writing on a certain stanza but you done it very well the message of ones conflict with ones self was good good job all around. Plot121 |
by Stephanie
I, too am not a religious person but the poem was amazing. You have mastered the form of a sonnet very well! Keep writing! 5.5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
I'm not religious, but i enjoyed this poem very much. the rhyming scheme was nice, as well as the flow. keep up the nice work. |
I read it, and I couldn't find anything wrong with it...good job Darling. |
by STePHaNie
AM NOT SURE OF THE PATTERN U USED BUT ITS SOUNDS PRETTY GO0D |