AM NOT SURE OF THE PATTERN U USED BUT ITS SOUNDS PRETTY GO0D
iTS ACTUALY GO0D 4 A 1ST TiMER

I read it, and I couldn't find anything wrong with it...good job Darling.

5.5

I'm not religious, but i enjoyed this poem very much. the rhyming scheme was nice, as well as the flow. keep up the nice work.

5/5.

I, too am not a religious person but the poem was amazing. You have mastered the form of a sonnet very well! Keep writing! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I always hated writing on a certain stanza but you done it very well the message of ones conflict with ones self was good good job all around. Plot121