"She's got me captured"
^ I should be " She has me captured"

I seriously LOVE this poem. :]
It was short, cute and sweet. You did a great job!!! :]
And, I loved the ending, of course!
Keep it up, hun.
5/5

Aww this is a very sweet and beautiful poem! i really like what it was about. it was nice! 5/5

~Kristina

Awesome poetry. I hate saying 'I can relate', it feels so cliche, but I really can. The imagery you used was beautiful.

Sole. x

I love the way that this person is shomaybe have you realised tyhat this girl may actually be traits of yourself?

I like it simplistic yet deep

Simple, but deep and satisfying. I like this poem. IT is short, sweet, and straight up. way to express yourself. 5/5