What is this?

by amoxi   Apr 23, 2007


Everytime he walks by i quiver,
My stomach gets butterflies,
My palms get sweaty,
My heart beats fast,
My face flushes.
Everytime i look at him i get nervous,
Its hard to breath,
I feel weak,
I become lightheaded,
My hands get tingly.
What is this feeling i feel for him?
Its so complicated,
Does he know?
Will he ever know?
Can i get the nerve to tell him?
Could this be love?
What is it that im feeling?

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    The best poetic quality in this piece is rhetorical questions. It really engaged me :) Loved the descriptions

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "I feel weak,
    I become lightheaded,
    My hands get tingly."

    Beautiful, you've captured the emotions of the first strikes of lust and emotions perfectly.
    The free verse style was a good choice as well.
    Well done m'dear
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Very sweet poem.. Told everything you were feeling, great one! Flow was good. Beautiful poem:)

  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    I agree with what "Trying to Hold on" said.. It is very honest and true. Everyone that is acutally falling inlove feels that way, I think. It flowed VERY well. Great job, keep up the good work. =)
    -Ally

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