I agree with what "Trying to Hold on" said.. It is very honest and true. Everyone that is acutally falling inlove feels that way, I think. It flowed VERY well. Great job, keep up the good work. =)
-Ally

Very sweet poem.. Told everything you were feeling, great one! Flow was good. Beautiful poem:)

"I feel weak,
I become lightheaded,
My hands get tingly."

Beautiful, you've captured the emotions of the first strikes of lust and emotions perfectly.
The free verse style was a good choice as well.
Well done m'dear
5/5
*Gem*

The best poetic quality in this piece is rhetorical questions. It really engaged me :) Loved the descriptions

Tc
Fsams