Comments : My Pain and Tears

  • 17 years ago

    by Dead Inside

    It's wierd, but this poem describes exactly how afternoons are spent. Just hang in there and remember that there are people that you can talk too.

    cesar

  • 17 years ago

    by Emo

    I personally luved it. thats what i like writing about and it sounds better i this than any of mine.:"> 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Wow its like you captured all my thoughts in this poem......i understand unfortunately but its better to be numb then feel every single unbearable feeling "happiness turned to love love turned to sadness sadnees turned to fear and fear turned to hate" keep holdin on keep writing its great how u are able to

    -laura- ps plz check my poems out and comment

  • 17 years ago

    by Alma

    Wow. I really liked it . It was really sad and filled with emotions, we sometimes let our fears consume us. loved it!
    5/5