Wow, even though this was a short poem it was quite breathtaking, strong and captivating all at the same time.

"I have embraced the darkness"

I have to say that was my favourite line because it built the overall darkness you were trying to convey in this poem. Embraced alone is such a strong word. Great write :]

Take Care.

Wow i like it it really caltivates wht ur trying to say and it i couldnt keep my eyes away 4rm it j3j3 even though it was short
X) cynthia m.

Your writing is so full of emotion. I've read so many today and they are all so good. nice job.

cesar

I like the way you write