In Between

by Avrii Monrielle   Apr 23, 2007


In Between

Lost in the middle,
Intense waters seeping,
Betwixt in my head,
Interfering sound sleeping.

Pounding white knuckles,
Entire system drained,
Nights spent staying up,
Eyes red and strained.

Knees touch the ground,
Feet hit the floor,
Praying for miracles,
Freely given before.

Elbows are aching,
Tears drop like water,
Heart tricked, confused,
As a sheep led to slaughter.

Sweet sanity's breaking,
Upon the black ice,
Lost in between,
To not pay the price.

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  • 17 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    Thanks, I WAs LIke Wow Another Comment And Yeah Your Right!! Thank Yu again..
    Take Care!!
    Luv Hanz aka perfectlyBROKEN xx

  • 17 years ago

    by perfectlyBROKEN

    I Loved It.. You a Great Writer And I LOved The Flow And The Wordz You Used.. Thank You Soo Much For YOur Commen, It Meant Alot!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Polaroid

    This was so so sad and interesting and deep.... would you mind explaining to me what the main idea was, i understood it but i'm not sure if i got it right.... great poem though real great

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